tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5724065045202893464.post7042533434178629436..comments2023-11-02T06:53:10.379-05:00Comments on The Typical Woman in America: how women are portrayed in music, magazines, and reality t.v: Blog Buddy Work: Melissa M; The Oprah PhenomenonDarling C.http://www.blogger.com/profile/01484271431529480602noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5724065045202893464.post-3432255807734060832007-04-20T16:30:00.000-05:002007-04-20T16:30:00.000-05:00Hey Darling:1. In Darling's blog, I found that th...Hey Darling:<BR/><BR/>1. In Darling's blog, I found that the post titled " The World of Advertising" is a complete summary of her topic. She explains the fact that society now considers beauty to be formed by society. Moreover, she even concludes that this type of stereotypical beauty may still lead to discontent. I was very satisfied with her general evaluations about the issues.<BR/><BR/>2. Well, she could use her presentation to speak to everyone about the underlining meanings of beauty- what is wrong and what is right. Her personal opinion is very strong.<BR/><BR/>Constructive Critisim on statements:<BR/><BR/>- Darling's topic is dead on with one of the most controversial topics out there- beauty vs. the media. She picked a topic that needs to be analyzed.<BR/><BR/>-I believe that this topic does interest Darling. Hey, it would interest any woman!<BR/><BR/>-The issue of gender was, without a doubt, analyzed and recognized.<BR/><BR/>-Darling's posts were clear and to the point and easy to acknowledge!<BR/><BR/>-Your quotes were relevant to the posts. Yet, sometimes they could have been a little stronger and more on point with what you wanted to say.<BR/><BR/>-Quotes, on this topic, were scattered throughout the semester. Moreover, specific beauty quotes were appliable. Also, the quotes added to Darling's thoughts relatively well.<BR/><BR/>* I thought it was great when you posted the video, since the stats are interesting.<BR/><BR/>*I really did not find anything confusing for me.<BR/><BR/>*You're really great at developing your ideas and remaining clear!<BR/><BR/>*I wish you could focus on these three things:<BR/>-Someone or something campaigning for real beauty<BR/>-What women should do to reject society's norms<BR/>-Maybe a personal experience <BR/><BR/>Hope this helped!!Melihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15039273728921543968noreply@blogger.com